THE NIGHT OF THE SLEEP OVER
Ahhhhhh! As we hide underneath the blanket in my room. our hearts race like a bunch of horses. We were watching a movie the night of the sleep over it was about . A lady who destroys sleep over because she never got invited to one. she would kill everyone who had a sleep over ewwwwww the lady was so scary that it felt like she was real. I quickly true off the tv. we were all scared to go to sleep, but evently we fell asleep. Booooooom has we heard noises coming up the stairs .What was that I said jumping out of my sleeping bag . All of a sudden the noise went away. Then there was a moment of silence. all of a sudden the door open, but there was no one there. A big red shadow appeared in the front of the my door. it just stood there with it's big black eyes starring at us. then it spoke this sleep over is over. That’s when I realize that the movie started to come true . It started to come toward us. I could see it's bones sticking out of it's body with blood coming down it face. there were also knifes stuck in it's guts. it was holding a sleeping bag. When she A pouched us I scream from the top of my lungs "RUN" as we head for the door. Boooooom it slammed right in our faces."DO YOU THINK YOU CAN ESCAPE FROM ME THINK AGAIN" it said in a scornful voice. She headed for Sasha . Sasha was one of me best friends I’ve know her from first grade. The monster approached Sasha and said your first. Sasha got so scared she started crying. The monster toke a knife from her body and cut Sasha body in half , and started crunch on her bones. As I started watching her kill Sasha I started crying . I also wonder if any one could hears , so I started to scearm , but my voice started getting lower and lower . My voice was gone, and more and more tears started coming down my eyes. Then she headed for khaki. Kaki is like my sister we've been friends since like ever. I couldn't bear to se what she was going to do to kaki. so I closed my eyes. Ewwwwww as I felt my self standing in blood . You wouldn't even imagine what she did to her see stuck knifes all over her body. and made her look like she looked. with knifes in her eyes balls , and blood was every were. Then it was the moment of truth she started to come toward me with the ugliest laugh ever ha "NOW IT YOUR TRUE" She toke out this saw , and who knows were it came from. I toke my last breath and closed my eyes. I couldn't scream , because remember she toke my voice away from me. when I felt the saw coming down on me I moved. she got so mad that she yelled out this biggest yell ever . It broke my ear socket , and now I could hear any thing , so I wouldn't be able to run away . I think this monster was the smartest monster ever , so know now it was time to face the facts , but I never give up . I just kept running around my run , and I could feel her getting so mad that she throw up blood all over me. so I looked like her for all I could . just with out of the knifes in my body. one thing I could say is so never give up. sadly to say she caught , and she give me the worst death every. She diced me up like I was a piece of meat , and mix me up in a bladder , and ate me like a horse on a stick. "HA " she said "I DID IT AGAIN". She left my house ,and was still on the search to destroy any other sleep over , but the one thing I hated was that when the monster left , and every one was dead. Ahhhhhhhhhhh my mom finally decided to come in my room to bad so sad. My mom made a research and found out her name Kelly Bechherdish . the way my mom new it was her is because she watch the movie
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by: DRD
The monster in your story needs to have more details,and we need to know who sasha is. also you get to end if the story to quicly, but the begging of it, was preatty good.
In some of your sentences the first letters of the begining of the sentence isn't capitlized. Other than that great story and good uses of S.O.A.P.
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