One Rainy Night
One rainy night I was standing in my room peering out my window. As I stood there I saw a young child standing outside playing ball by himself, he had a freakish yellow glow that engulfed him. I was scared at first but then in a blink of an eye he was gone. I had thought it was my imagination at first but then I told myself that it was probably a kid that had to go to dinner. At that instant it stopped raining. The next morning at breakfast my mother told me we would go to the park I was excited at first but then I remembered the child and his yellowish glow.
As me my mother and my dog we walking across the bridge I spotted the young child that stood there with two mitts and a ball. I asked my mom if it was OK if I could go play with him, she said it was fine. We played till around 4:00 in the after noon. We played about twice a week for about five weeks, till one day I felt a little weird and when we went to the park me and the kid played that day he stopped me before I left and he said that his name was Tyron Bigums. It had never crossed my mind to ask him what his name was.
Later that day at dinner my mother asked what was the boys name and I told her and at that moment her jaw dropped as she looked at me with amazement as if she had heard the name before I asked her what was wrong she said that he used to be a drug dealer and those who tried to go against him and his crew he would cut them up and shiped them to different countries were he would have them either thrown in a furnace or fed to dogs or sharks.
After that I never saw him again.
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3 comments:
i thought it was really good and had a lot of details in the beginning and then at the end it started getting less interesting.
why would you choose a drug dealer for the end?
I liked your story because you used good language and also i felt as if i was reading a book,but i don't understand why you used a drug dealer at the end. but still it was good.
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