There were 100’s and 100’s of zombies and I was cutting, slashing away at the zombies and than my alarm clock rang. I jumped out of bed with sweet dripping down my for head, and I was dizzy. As I wake up and I am eating breakfast I see every one outside and they all look like there half dead.
So then I leave my house for work and this guy starts to follow me. When I get a good look at his eyes they were completely red, and he was making a weird noise like Ahh Ahh, and then I realized that all the people were doing that. I new what it had to be they were all zombies that awakened from the graveyard of hell. So than I new that I had to hide or they would find me and eat my guts out. So I hid in the nearest building which was the mall.
When I got into the mall I said to my self holy crap my dream is coming true. The town looks the same that it did in my dream dark cold and foggy. I had my pistol that I carry in my pocket for self protection but that was not enough for that long. I new that I would need more guns and ammo so that I can fight off the basterds. Wile I was gathering the stuff they started to come in one by one.
As quick as I could I got my gun and shot them in the head, because that is the only way to kill them. luck fully they stoped coming in for a little wile and I gathered my things and went to the other side of the mall. They started to come back in again and I shot them as soon as they came through the door. Then they started pouring in and I was killing as many as I could until they got to me and then I started to use everything that I had. Boom, boom, slash I was using everything and than the last thing that I had was a chainsaw and all that I could here was the chainsaw and the sound of sawing through the flesh and bone blood every were. and than the sun came up and they started to drop dead to the floor one by one.
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Hmmm, good hook. Love the way it started and you IMPLIED it was a dream. Be careful of your tenses, though. You spent a lot of time in the present tense and it sounded very informal and conversational. Be sure to eliminate the "I"s and the "so"s.
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