Tuesday, November 07, 2006
One cloudy night it was about six o’clock, and Amanda was in the black car. S he was wit her friends Kevin, nick, and Alex. They were all on their way to watch Ryan’s football game. He was the wide receiver. Ryan was Amanda’s boyfriend and nick, Alex, and Kevin’s friend . The game was already two minutes into the first quarter. They all sat down hung out, talked and watch the game. The football game was now over and so we all waited for Ryan to come out of the locker room and he finally did and went to Amanda and gave her a hug and a kiss and said hey to everyone else. They all congratulated him on his two touchdowns he scored. He ran one in the end zone fiercely and caught one he had an awesome game. Ryan’s team had won the game even though it was very close the score was 21 to 24.Amanda offered Nick, Ryan, Alexandra, and Kevin if they all wanted to go back to her house because her parents were out to dinner. So they all went back to her house. She herd a crashing sound in her house while she was opening her door so she and all her friends checked the house to make sure no one had been or robed her house so they searched her entire house. They found nobody or nothing in her house missing s0o decided to say maybe it was just my dog. So they all sat down talked about the game a little and talked about a bunch of different things. They suggested watching a scary movie so they decided on Saw III. Amanda just had bought the movie the other night so she went upstairs to go get the movie and Ryan followed her up. They got the movie and were about to walk down stairs until the phone rang. Amanda asked Ryan to check the caller ID to see who it was but it just had said no number so Amanda ignored the phone call. So they got down stairs and the phone rang again but this time it didn’t stop ringing she answered the phone and answered hello but there was no answer back she said hello about three times now no answer so she said it one more time and now finally she had got an answer back the man had said hello Amanda how’s it going and she answered hi who is this? The man screamed look outside your window and you will find out but he had screamed it so fast she didn’t understand what he had said And then the man had hung up by the time she could answer back what ? Ryan asked Amanda who that had been because she had a frighten look on her face. She just had said to Ryan I don’t know but come on let’s go downstairs and watch the movie. Amanda put in the movie and made sure all the doors were locked and windows were covered and shut. As she was closing the last window she saw a white flash dart throw her yard but she didn’t know what it was so she started getting scared. She walked over to the coach and sat down and the movie just begun. They herd a knock on the door so Amanda sighed and got up and got the door before she was going to open it she looked out the peep hole to see who it was but nobody was there. She looked and found a piece of paper sitting on the floor so she picked it up and opened it and read what it had said….. I was the one on the phone and im also the one in your house. Amanda dropped the letter and ran like a race horse and jumped on the coach and told them what had happened what the letter had said and the just looked at her like so was crazy. She said look ill show you look and she reached into her pocket but nothing was the she remember she dropped the letter. She trotted back to go get the latter but it was gone. She went back to her friends it’s gone but im not lying it’s really true I swear believe me. But they all just thought it was a joke or she was trying to pull a prank on them. So Amanda just said lets get back to the movie but no one was there but Ryan asked were did Kevin, Nick, and Alex go? Amanda answer back I don’t know did they leave? Or maybe them man got them Amanda joked. Ryan chuckled no I don’t think the man got them or I don’t know where they went. Finally all three of them jumped out behind the table and scared the heck out of Amanda. She screeched and jumped higher then Michael Jordan ever could. But then started to laugh because she realized it was just her friends. It was too late to watch the movie now so Amanda told everyone that they could watch it tomorrow. Everyone gave each other hugs or slapped each other hands (the boys with the boys), and they all went home. Amanda got a phone call and it was the man Again he said come in your room start looking for me in your house im still in here ok tries finding me now! Amanda walked up to her room very slowly with an enormous butcher’s knife in her right hand holding it up by her ear shaking so badly. She got up to her room and seared it impatiently she had wished her friends were still with her. She went through her whole house she couldn’t find him so she thought it was just a prank or something. She sat down on her coach and relaxed for a minute then she felt someone breathing on her leg so she looked under the coach and then the man grabbed her leg. The were wrestling and then she finally stabbed him with the knife and hit him in the head with a chair he was knocked out she dragged him outside and called the cops to come get her and they arrived asked questions and Amanda had told them everything that had happened. She called her friends to come over and she would tell them everything that happened. She had blood all over her and tears running down her face like a waterfall and she looked down and realized she had been cut from the knife Kevin Nick and Alex had arrived at her house and took they took Amanda to the hospital and then they got home about 2 hours her parents were home and we told them what had happened. As time went on it was about two years later and they were all at Amanda’s house. They were playing a game and then Amanda’s phone started to ring she didn’t check who it was and she put it on speaker phone cause they were in the middle of playing. And she said hello no answer so she looked at her friend’s wit a weird stear and then an answer came hello Amanda .Amanda’s eyes grew very wide. And then the man said IM BACK! In a long voice. Amanda dropped the phone and everyone started at each other with a scared puzzled face.
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2 comments:
I like the way you used the simily: ran like a race horse because i could picture Amanda running really fast.
i thought that it was prety good but i did not get this 1 part Amanda offered Nick, Ryan, Alexandra, and Kevin if they all wanted to go back to her house
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