The House
Woo Touchdown! The happy crowd screaming, the cheerleaders cheering for
Charters, and the Football players playing. The intercom blowing out the speakers
screaming “and the Charters just won the game 2 to 0”. The crowd went wild.
As the football players ran to the locker room and got changed as fast as the speed
of light. The cheerleaders all said goodbye to each other, the football players were doing
the same to each other. There was only one boy and one girl left, and their names were
Jessica and Brian. Jessica had a lake house up in the mountains. The both decided to go
there alone.
As they got there, Brian noticed there was no gas left in the car, and a gas
station was on the next signal. Brian asked Jessica to go and pay the gas. She happily
skipped into the station. She opened the door, and silence came out. The cashier looked
as though he didn’t know the showers were ever invented, his face was full of tattoos and
piercing, and he took one look at Jessica and gave her the ugliest glare, with disgust in his
eyes.
She quickly paid the cashier and ran out the door. She got to the car with fear in
her eyes and automatically Brian asked what was going on?. She just said “nothing, let’s
just go”. They both got in the car and drove off. As they got to the house, it was so cold
and cold that they were both so exited and couldn’t just wait to go inside. The wind made
so much noise that it banged on the window like someone banging on their door. She got
a little bit afraid but Brian calmed her down.
They were both laughing and giggling as they went upstairs. There was a loud
noise coming from downstairs. Jessica getting terrified and told Brian to go and check it
out. When he left the room, a suspicious noise came from the other room. Jessica called
out for Brian but he didn’t answer. She got up from the bed and went to see what the
noise was. When she got to the other room, there was a shadow. It looked like the
branches of the tree and heard the same noise coming from behind her. She took a
tremendous frightful look to see, Ahh! She screams as a man pops up in front of her. She
quickly got smashed in the corner of the wall face first, she had no time to yell for help,
he put his hand on her left cheek and rapidly yanked out of her teeth in her mouth
and blood splashed everywhere everywhere. Brian heard a noise and headed upstairs, he
yelled and yelled for her name but nowhere to be found or heard. He went to the
room where she was murdered and blood everywhere then saw her body in the hands of
the cashier at the gas station. He ran straight for the telephone to call the police, but in a
heart beat he was on the floor bleeding.
No one ever found out what happen to both of them and now the story remains
unsolved. The killer is still out there looking for more people to kill at another gas station.
Woo Touchdown! The happy crowd screaming, the cheerleaders cheering for
Charters, and the Football players playing. The intercom blowing out the speakers
screaming “and the Charters just won the game 2 to 0”. The crowd went wild.
As the football players ran to the locker room and got changed as fast as the speed
of light. The cheerleaders all said goodbye to each other, the football players were doing
the same to each other. There was only one boy and one girl left, and their names were
Jessica and Brian. Jessica had a lake house up in the mountains. The both decided to go
there alone.
As they got there, Brian noticed there was no gas left in the car, and a gas
station was on the next signal. Brian asked Jessica to go and pay the gas. She happily
skipped into the station. She opened the door, and silence came out. The cashier looked
as though he didn’t know the showers were ever invented, his face was full of tattoos and
piercing, and he took one look at Jessica and gave her the ugliest glare, with disgust in his
eyes.
She quickly paid the cashier and ran out the door. She got to the car with fear in
her eyes and automatically Brian asked what was going on?. She just said “nothing, let’s
just go”. They both got in the car and drove off. As they got to the house, it was so cold
and cold that they were both so exited and couldn’t just wait to go inside. The wind made
so much noise that it banged on the window like someone banging on their door. She got
a little bit afraid but Brian calmed her down.
They were both laughing and giggling as they went upstairs. There was a loud
noise coming from downstairs. Jessica getting terrified and told Brian to go and check it
out. When he left the room, a suspicious noise came from the other room. Jessica called
out for Brian but he didn’t answer. She got up from the bed and went to see what the
noise was. When she got to the other room, there was a shadow. It looked like the
branches of the tree and heard the same noise coming from behind her. She took a
tremendous frightful look to see, Ahh! She screams as a man pops up in front of her. She
quickly got smashed in the corner of the wall face first, she had no time to yell for help,
he put his hand on her left cheek and rapidly yanked out of her teeth in her mouth
and blood splashed everywhere everywhere. Brian heard a noise and headed upstairs, he
yelled and yelled for her name but nowhere to be found or heard. He went to the
room where she was murdered and blood everywhere then saw her body in the hands of
the cashier at the gas station. He ran straight for the telephone to call the police, but in a
heart beat he was on the floor bleeding.
No one ever found out what happen to both of them and now the story remains
unsolved. The killer is still out there looking for more people to kill at another gas station.
2 comments:
i really like the way you put alot of detail in your story. i like the way you started off your essay.
i also like you made me feel like it was real.i love the puncation.
This was such a good story I loved the way you used smilies and other S.O.A.P.I. terms. The story really pulls you in and your awaylys wondring whats going to happen next so you always keep on reading.
Good Job.. I really enjoyed it.
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