Monday, November 06, 2006

“Zombie Village”

There was a knock on my door but when I looked to see who it was, it was a zombie with a chain saw saying kill, kill. But then I woke up with sweat running down my face, then I look to see if my limbs where still in place.

When I clam down I look at the clock and it was 8:00am! I better get ready or my parents will leave me at home. When we got everything pack we hit the road and headed to zombie village for Halloween.

When we got there it was dark and my little brother tried to scare me about five times. Some times he is really annoying. We where walking to the hotel when something furry like a dog stroke the back of my neck and I thought it was my brother trying to scare me again in till I turned around and there was a giant spider standing right there in front of me I screamed like a little girl.

The giant spider tried to put one of his big legs over my mouth but I pushed it back. Then my brother came out side with a flashlight to see who screamed. When he turned on the flashlight the giant spider ran away.

The next day I went outside after breakfast and went into the forest with my little brother. We were playing hide in seek when I heard my brother screamed. I went running in the direction where the scream came from. When I got there were rats that cornered my bother. When the rats say me one looked up and said in a coarse voice” Your death is near”. The next day my brother and I saw that parents are died because there was the hand of my father on the bed. That must have been those rat I thought. For the rest of the day it was so quite you could hear a pin drop.

We spent the rest of the day paying thanks to are parents. My brother was sad because he had a good connection with are father. He went to bed early. When I went to bed I prayed to the lord to help us stay alive.

The next day I woke up. Wait this is not are hotel. AHHHHHHHHH! My brother and I were hanging over an acid pool. There was a person standing there. “Hello Sam” said Sharpie “My name is Sharpie”. “What are you doing”? I said “you’re going to kill us right”. “Just your brother” said Sharpie “And leave you in pain”.

He did just what he said. He kicked me out of his place and most likely killed my brother. The next day I killed myself because I was too sad to go on with life and that’s where I died in zombie village.

2 comments:

JNS said...

i like the use of word choice and how spacific you were nice job
from:jns

DBK said...

I thought your story was good, but some of the words you spelt wrong and some parts didn't make sence.